Cory-Persuasive+Writing

= = = **//Everything we need to know is on the Internet, so why do we come to school?//** =

== **//The Internet is most likely to be the smartest thing on the planet, but does it really have to overtake our school life? Parents will have to drop work to look after their young. If we let them do school work on the computer, addiction will start to over whelm kid’s brains //** ==

== **//If we replace a teacher with a computer, our social life will fade away as normal kids these days are the ones who are outside playing and mucking around with friends on the street. The only sense of communication between student and student will probably be facebook, twitter and other popular sites. Sport won’t be played and won’t be taught so kids won’t be fit. //** ==

== **//Furthermore, if we throw school in the bin, what about the parents? Most of them will be forced to resign work just to look after their children! This would be a catastrophic disaster for parents who are single due to the lose of work and puts them into the crisis of debt. This puts pressure on them to find out a way to get out of this situation. So why do this? //** ==

== **//Addiction. Will this effect us kids if we replace all teachers? Of course it will! Children will get so addicted, that their lives will run along the wires of a computer. They will be on their all day long chatting to their friends and getting very little done. Games will become habits and games that are violent, may well become an addictive game and will change lifestyles. //** ==

== **//Should we take the risk? Definitely not! Kids won’t be normal kids and communication will be black and white lettering. We don’t want families going into debt and struggle to survive. We certainly do not want kids getting bad habits and letting their lives on a computer. The only thing is, do you agree? //** ==

= **//There needs to be stricter guidelines on advertising on T.V //** =

== 'Another hole in the wallet.' Why is this happening? Advertisements. Children watching television are beginning to get frustrated as advertisements are coming on every five miutes. Each T.V programme is stretching as each viewing time is jam packed with ads. Therefore more time is being spent watching the television. The types of advertisements are not being put on the right channels because there might be an ad for explicit music, which is put on a child's channel! This means there needs to be stricter guidlines for ads. ==

== During childrens television shows, ads pop up. Most children can put up with a couple of ads but then it devolops into a situation. kids start to get fed up with these ads as they retaliate too many times. If the child is not annoyed with the programmes, it genrally ends with 'Mummy, Daddy I want this!' This will end up in a pout otherwise the parents will have to cash out. Why children shows? ==

== In addition, our viewing times seem to become longer just to fit in more ads. One movie might start at five o'clock, then end at 8 o'clock {excluding credits.} But really it only goes for about two hours and the rest is jam-packed to exploding point with ads! Is it too many? Whats your opinion? Mine difinitely is that we need to cut down on ads so we can watch a proper movie, not one that continuosly reviews advertisements. ==

== More reasons why stricter guidelines need to be enforced is that some advertisements are going on the wrong channel for example, explicit music is being put on kids channels! This is convincing kids in the wrong way. This is encouraging them to buy it and listen to it which will have effect on their lifestyles. Other advertisements range from torys, food and movies at the cinema. Look at toys, put it on a kids channel and what do you get? That silly old hole in the pcket. So stop and think. Do you want that to happen to you? ==

== Should we make stricter guidelines on the types of advertisements shown on the telly? I think! Why let children get annoyed at the T.V over ads or ask for toys and have a cry? Reduce viewing times so we can watch a proper movie instead of an adathon. Take off those silly ads being shown on kids channels that are overrated for children. Come on people, put on those stricter guidelines. ==